Wednesday, May 18, 2011

My Very Perfect World

Go ahead and listen to those singing birds as the vocalize a wonderful tune of pleasantness and calmness. Feels good right? Unfortunately, everyday is not like. Crimes, injustice, gloomy days; They are all apart of out natural society and it's just how some people are in this world. But what if there was 1 day of a perfect and moderate day. The difference would be major but the overall hospitality is most important. This is the brief and content story of just 1 day of a perfect society, government, and WORLD.
As I awoke from a deep and soothing sleep, I found many alterations: There were no crimes located and broadcasted on the news, I heard young children screaming in high upbeat voices with each other in a pleasant and happily manner, and I just felt that today was perfect. I still heard the tweeting of flashy birds and the screaming of unruly neighbors but it just sounded right. The neighbors screamed in a very elated tone. In a short deep breath, I sprung out of bed and entered in the mode of cleanliness by showering and getting ready for the day. When finished, I stormed out with a thrilled smile and went on with my now-peppy life.
My first encroachment outside was just mind-shattering: Everyone was having fun and everyone was enjoying life. I experienced happiness. Friendly neighbors were accompanied by friendly children. Everything was just right. After that, I just carried on with my life as if it were like normal. However, while committing these actions I was treated right. When I got back home, I knew today was the best day ever.
SUMMARY:
Differences from real world- no crimes, young children screaming with upbeat voices, and a 'perfect' feeling. (Paragraph 2)

Similarities with real world- tweeting of flashy birds, screaming of unruly neighbors, and carried on with life as if it were normal. (Paragraphs 2 + 3)
Ordinary day- paragraphs 2-3

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