So far in my book, I have figured that Greg has had mechanical headgear adjusted on his face by his new dentist. In my independent reading novel, I was able to come to the conclusion that the person in my book I would be friends with is Greg. Greg's careless attitude is somewhat similar to mine creating a cohesive bonding. I feel me and Greg's mindset to ideas like waking up early or changing dental doctors are identical. As seen in the text, "My alarm went off and all, but the sound just worked its way into my dream (Page 76.)" I, myself, have trouble waking up in the morning without assistance as does Greg displaying our similar ways. According to the text, "But dad drove right past my dentist's office and got on the highway (Page 91.)" This statement proved how Greg was neglected for his needs from his dad by being switched dentists. If I were in Greg's position, I would feel the same.
J.L NUI JRZY
Wednesday, March 7, 2012
Wednesday, February 29, 2012
Eveyrbody Hates Greg Heffley
During the next days I have read through of the diary, Greg has been in several issues as he always is. To start off, has had trouble waking up in the morning without his dad's assistance. Before their moms' departure from the family to go to school, dad woke Greg up every morning for school. But, after she left, Greg tried and tried waking himself up after dad decided it was time for Greg to be a big boy and wake himself up. One of Greg's maneuvers to wake up was to use a very loud ticking alarm. Little did Greg know, that was a alarm that ticks and ticks and ticks over and over again, so Greg was barely sleeping through the night because of the loud ticking alarm. The next day, Greg accidentally hit the fire alarm during class because he was still sleepy from his exploding alarm clock, but did not turn himself in after hearing the consequences. A few days later he was moved on short notice by his dad to a different dentist. Of course, there is always a reason why Greg is facing this situation worried and angered; He will be leaving his hot, young dentist for a older, more serious dentist.
A unique trait for Greg is that he is uncooperative. I could tell because he in not cooperating with his dentist or dad. The text states, "That's actually a real problem, because I depend on HIM to wake me up. (Page 75.)" This quote shows that Greg is dependent on his dad and has been uncooperative ever since dad decided not to wake up Greg. According to the text, "I thought about making a run for it, but dad must've known what I was thinking, because he locked the doors. (Page 92.)" This quote represents how he is not cooperating with his dads' decision on a new dentist. This is why I believe Greg's unique trait is uncooperative.
A unique trait for Greg is that he is uncooperative. I could tell because he in not cooperating with his dentist or dad. The text states, "That's actually a real problem, because I depend on HIM to wake me up. (Page 75.)" This quote shows that Greg is dependent on his dad and has been uncooperative ever since dad decided not to wake up Greg. According to the text, "I thought about making a run for it, but dad must've known what I was thinking, because he locked the doors. (Page 92.)" This quote represents how he is not cooperating with his dads' decision on a new dentist. This is why I believe Greg's unique trait is uncooperative.
Sunday, February 26, 2012
Wimpy Kids... Aren't Those Exciting People?
Throughout the 70 pages I have read, the main character. Greg Heffley, has described his un-content life from his friends/teachers, advertisements, 'grammie,' and his encounter with his neighbor's plants. In the beginning of the book, Greg was introduced to his once-friend, Rowley's new 'Cool Brian' which is basically a way for kids to hang with a friend. Later on, he found the ad for a new Peachy Breeze kid sponsor. Telling his mom this, Greg discovered his mom rather wanted Manny, his younger brother, to audition but Greg was able to hitch a ride with his mom before she left. Once there, Greg was tripped up, failing to catch attention by the producers. Then, Greg explained his grandma and how she is emotional like when he described the moment when she sat down triggering a whoopie cushion, becoming embarrassed. Thus, she wrote a letter saying she was sorry, so in response, Greg had to write his response back. Finally, Greg had to watch out for his neighbor's plants. Unaware he forgot to water them, Greg was yelled at by the neighbor for that, and that he left the keys in the keyhole when he left.
I believe that the best trait to describe Greg is humorous. I believe so because he is always making readers' laugh at his stunts and actions throughout the book. In the text, it states, "... I just throw one of my pillows across the room.... "Hey, what's this pillow doing here? (Pg. 70)" Once reading this, I was able to figure that Greg is not only humorous, but easily-forgetting. Even with the whoopie cushion incident, I giggled as he had to write a letter back to his grandma. If you had ever read a Diary of A Wimpy Kid, I guarantee that you will laugh at least once at Greg's adventures during Middle School. I get most of my humour from Greg and I'm inspired by his ways of handling situations. On that note, I believe Greg Heffley can be described perfectly by the trait, funny/humorous.
I believe that the best trait to describe Greg is humorous. I believe so because he is always making readers' laugh at his stunts and actions throughout the book. In the text, it states, "... I just throw one of my pillows across the room.... "Hey, what's this pillow doing here? (Pg. 70)" Once reading this, I was able to figure that Greg is not only humorous, but easily-forgetting. Even with the whoopie cushion incident, I giggled as he had to write a letter back to his grandma. If you had ever read a Diary of A Wimpy Kid, I guarantee that you will laugh at least once at Greg's adventures during Middle School. I get most of my humour from Greg and I'm inspired by his ways of handling situations. On that note, I believe Greg Heffley can be described perfectly by the trait, funny/humorous.
Wednesday, January 4, 2012
ATTENTION READERS
My recent work has been posted into an entire novel. Check it at dorkz4ever.blogspot.com
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Sunday, November 6, 2011
David Platypus Trailer
David Platypus, server of justice who aged to his 70's, must fight crime as he teams with his friend, Bruce Kennedy, to defeat convicts plotting to take down the duo. Check it out. This is why I've been lacking some blogposts. So far, a new post about an escape is being edited. Keep it cool n' keep reviewing my posts. http://coolstorybro124.blogspot.com/view/classic
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Thursday, October 27, 2011
Monster- Independent Novel
The text I have read over the past two weeks was the novel, 'Monster.' This book was about how lawyers, O'Brien and Briggs, vouched and attempted to keep the accused Steve Harmon and James King from going 25 years to life in prison. Steve and James are charged for the murder of drugstore clerk, referred mostly as Mr. Nesbitt, and robbery of cigarettes. The novel mostly took place in a courtroom where O'Brien and Briggs were pleading to the jury that Harmon and King were not guilty but Petrocelli, the lawyer against O'Brien and Briggs thought otherwise. She planned to plead the jury that Steve and James are guilty of murder and robbery. Links to the robbery also included Bolden, Cruz, and Bobo. Bobo played a key role the jury by stating that he was involved in the murder, thus stating that he killed Mr. Nesbitt, so far as proved in court. However, Bolden and Cruz were linked to the murder if they either wanted some of the money or in Cruz's case, wanted Harmon and King locked up in jail. Bobo, Cruz, and Bolden all knew each other which was proved in the text. This 'bond' made their be several different understandings of the scene. Some of which stated that Steve Harmon was lookout for the King and Bobo to search if there were any cops in the store. However, King and Bobo 'accidentally' shot Mr. Nesbitt with his own drugstore gun. All of these statements were much similar to each other and if the book stopped at that point, King, Harmon, and Bobo should be guilty and sent to 25 years to life in prison. Luckily, there was some more court left to handle. O'Brien and Briggs later on plead that Harmon and King were not guilty. Unfortunately, King was sent of to 25 years to life in prison but he wasn't alone. Osvaldo (Mr. Cruz) and Bobo went to prison as well for taking part in the robbery. Luckily, Steve was sent free. He went on with his life with a happy mother and decided to make films.
Saturday, October 22, 2011
The Adventure of Marty Brown
Shivers and goosebumps chilled and cooled Marty Brown as the coldness woke him up signaling another freezing school day in the icy Rockies. However, this day didn't start off as projected: Marty woke up as a beaver. At first, Marty though of this as just another prank pulled by his brother Rocky but after repeating his daily routine, Marty was shocked to see no change in his image. Upon entering the bus, Marty was recognized with a hood dangling from his hair to his upper-chin. The strange stench of Canadian animal-life flowed through each seat of the bus like blood flowing through each and every organ inside your body. Double-takes of Marty was a common, but today, Marty had triple-takes. Denver wasn't known for their hatred of animals, but they were always ready to slash and gash beavers. Canadians were Colorado's most feared and hated type of people so seeing Marty in beaver-form wasn't so pleasing. Luckily, none of the passengers planned to harm Marty for they were not entirely sure Marty was in complete beaver-form. Arriving to school, Marty beavered' around the school trying to hide his beaver-looks from the students. The day was coming to a great start for Marty until lunch came.
As lunch rushed through the day, Marty was experiencing another symptom of turning into a beaver: A beaver tail. As this unlikely phenomenon was taking place, Marty's friend, Kyle, started to notice the transformation. However, Kyle did not warn Marty so Marty was dumbfounded once he noticed the waffle-tail evolving. Marty then, tried his hardest to keep the tail from being noticed by anyone else. Unaware that Kyle knew, Marty planned to tell Kyle before anyone else knew.
By the end of the day, Marty was in complete beaver-mode and then died. (Ending intended)
"SORRY fans for this terrible ending. Your blogger was rushed..."
Sincerely,
Marty The Beaver Brown
By the end of the day, Marty was in complete beaver-mode and then died. (Ending intended)
"SORRY fans for this terrible ending. Your blogger was rushed..."
Sincerely,
Marty The Beaver Brown
Tuesday, October 18, 2011
Sensory Details?
POLAR BEAR LAYING ON THE GROUND IN A FETTLE POSITION (IMAGE WILL BE GIVEN IN WORDS...)
As the guts poured out of the white, prodigious, and once-feared polar bear flew out straight from his body, his life flashed before his eyes as if he starred the dramatic ending scene in most movies. Raw fish congested the air while rotting to a remorseful with several bones popping out making a click-clacking noise as if it were a symphony from Beethoven. Starvation was common for this endangered specie, but none were as horrifyingly-bad at this moment. Click...Clack...Bump...Crack. That's all the came through as the the mammal laid there with his eyes closed shut and his tongue dangling from his mouth. His body shivered in coldness and flinched once or twice before the immediate death. Misery seeped through his body and was showing gracefully hovering over his remaining corpse. The polar bear's weight was a mere 200 lbs in counting slightly dropping by the second. His ear was combusted leading all the bloop to drip little by little on the ice-cold snow. Temperatures was a definite and absolute -100 degrees F. Wishes crowded the crowd as if they were Tweets through Twitter. Every single watcher looked on in horror as the bear's insides gushed out like how gushers pick-pop in your mouth. Frantically, the bear lost all his guts and lost all his fur in minutes. Drip...Drop...Pick...Pop...Dead....
As the guts poured out of the white, prodigious, and once-feared polar bear flew out straight from his body, his life flashed before his eyes as if he starred the dramatic ending scene in most movies. Raw fish congested the air while rotting to a remorseful with several bones popping out making a click-clacking noise as if it were a symphony from Beethoven. Starvation was common for this endangered specie, but none were as horrifyingly-bad at this moment. Click...Clack...Bump...Crack. That's all the came through as the the mammal laid there with his eyes closed shut and his tongue dangling from his mouth. His body shivered in coldness and flinched once or twice before the immediate death. Misery seeped through his body and was showing gracefully hovering over his remaining corpse. The polar bear's weight was a mere 200 lbs in counting slightly dropping by the second. His ear was combusted leading all the bloop to drip little by little on the ice-cold snow. Temperatures was a definite and absolute -100 degrees F. Wishes crowded the crowd as if they were Tweets through Twitter. Every single watcher looked on in horror as the bear's insides gushed out like how gushers pick-pop in your mouth. Frantically, the bear lost all his guts and lost all his fur in minutes. Drip...Drop...Pick...Pop...Dead....
The Cures
Demented, perturbed, disturbed... Then comes The Cures. These threatening children of the freezing pop-sickle like city of Detroit were known for their elite and utter-madness within this city. Ruins shattered and scattered the outer thick layers of the ground with the evil scent of victory for the evil-doers. Tasted like the blood shed from the victims of the fallen. Once killed, the gang-bangers cremated the body before robbing the inner and cotton-soft pockets of the poor wrong-doers. One slip of misleading messages would leave you sliced and diced as if you were another victim of the hash-slinging slasher (as used in Spongebob.) The Cures had no cure and luckily this was all settled through the Stanford visionary arts committee. Stanford, the place where you're dreams will come true. Visit Today!
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